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This was invaluable advice today, something I really needed. A few months ago, I got to my midpoint, a moment I was beyond thrilled to finally write…and things were not working. I realized I had to go back to the first plot point and rewrite from there. I’m glad to hear that you’ve struggled with this too!

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Ah, I'm so glad this resonated with you, Dani! It's really, REALLY hard to swallow that what you wrote might need reworking...but once you do, ah! Progress!

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Yes!!! I’ve had to do these things too, and it’s so satisfying to understand why something isn’t working and how it needs to be fixed. I had the thinking out loud thing several years ago when I realized I was focused too hard on keeping a book under a certain word count, and once I let that go...boom!

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Ah, I love that. When you can finally let go of the "I shoulds" and even "but I need tos," the answer always seems to come...

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This friend is always happy to help brainstorm! Ahem.

Thanks for sharing your process when stuck. I also rely on looking backward often and brainstorming things with a friend/editor. Like you said, even if you don’t find a solution, maybe you have a better idea of what the solution might be... and you probably now know a few things the DONT/WONT work, which is sometimes key to finding what will.

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Haha, you were an invaluable brainstorm buddy for The Hunting Moon!

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Wow, Susan, what an incredibly helpful post. With all the craft info out there, I continue find your concept-by-concept, solution-by-solution discussions some of the most valuable.

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Thank you, Avram! I'm so glad this and my other advice is helpful for you! 😊

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I am in this spot right now and reading this was so validating to my recent decision to step back and do some hard thinking. After a lot of steady progress it feels like failure (at first) to come to a screeching halt right before the end of act 2 but I need to trust that intuition that something’s not right. Thank you for this!

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Definitely trust that intuition! We're so hard on ourselves if we "stop," but often stopping is exactly the thing we need to do!

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I loved this post SO much! Thank you for sharing this 😊"Feeling" a story truly does unlock doors.

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Thank you!! I know not everyone will resonate with the idea of "feeling," but it has been so helpful for me!

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This came at the perfect time for me! I’d spent a couple days avoiding working on my current draft and realized, after reading this, that is gotten off track. I was able to go a few scenes back and see where the emotional dominos stopped lining up and figure out what was going on. So thank you!!

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Oh yay! I am so glad this was what you needed to here and gave you some tools to move onward again! 🥰☺️

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