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Well, the fear part doesn’t necessarily matter, does it? If they aren’t realizing they feel fear, then it’s not important to the choices they’re making. Assuming you’re in deep POV (and therefore only providing what the character knows), then we the reader can only know what they know. Does that make sense? If they realize they’re afraid…
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Well, the fear part doesn’t necessarily matter, does it? If they aren’t realizing they feel fear, then it’s not important to the choices they’re making. Assuming you’re in deep POV (and therefore only providing what the character knows), then we the reader can only know what they know. Does that make sense? If they realize they’re afraid…
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